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A poem of Nightmare and Nightopia

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A poem of Nightmare and Nightopia

Postby RealaRulez96 on Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:53 pm

This is based on JoD


Nightopia
Gardens of water,
Valleys so pure,
Whenever you're sad
It's the only cure

Parks that are lost,
Palaces of glass,
One little crack,
And it will all be a mass (P.S. That wasn't a mis type)

Forests of mystery,
Cities of lights,
So many things
Just filled with delights

The Nightopians play safely,
And dance in the lights,
They have nothing to fear
Cause their protector is NiGHTS

Nightmare
Vast seas of darkness
Endless plains of despair,
You'll get hopeless lost
If you don't take care

Horrifying marens,
Terrible beasts,
Things that will scare you
With not one thought in the least.

Stripes of red,
Stripes of black,
He's the worst of them all
Who's got Wizemans back

He's deadliest one,
He'll steal your Ideya,
His name we all know
For it is Reala!!

What do you think? I think it's pretty good myself. :D
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Postby SiLK on Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:16 am

Very nice! I like it :)
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Postby RealaRulez96 on Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:03 pm

Thanks, this is my first ever poem so I'm really happy that I did good on it
:D
I'm planning on making a couple more for NiGHTS and Reala, Claris and Elliot, and Will and Helen.
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Postby MagicPickleFairy on Thu Aug 28, 2008 8:53 pm

You have a very good knack for poetry. The poem describes both Nightopia and Nightmare very well, along with the characters.
The Gothic Lolita style looks great on Nightmaren!
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Postby AleatheEccentric on Thu Sep 04, 2008 10:47 pm

O____________O... wow that's good. Umm... did you say this was your first poem? O.0'
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__(Y Y)__
... / | \ Oh Speigel!! You came to! :D
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Postby RealaRulez96 on Fri Sep 05, 2008 12:47 am

Well..........It's sort of my first poem about NiGHTS themed stuff. I have have written other ones at my school.
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Postby AleatheEccentric on Fri Sep 05, 2008 3:44 pm

Sweeeeeeeeeeeet! (-___________-) Your-a-natural! ^_^
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... / | \ Oh Speigel!! You came to! :D
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Postby RealaRulez96 on Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:23 pm

Thanks
I'm still trying to come up with a few more. XD
Check out my poem about Jackle.
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