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This story is just TO exiciting!! I love it and this has to be the only fanfic I've ever read with Jackle acting the way he's supposed to. I love him!! keep up the good work.

Yo! Thanks! and I shall!

Yay! You're writing again!

Happyness 8D

This is really good. It's got joy, sorrow, suspense, and even humor! I think I might write a fan-fic now.

YAY!^w^

" I'm so glad I've found you-"

" NOW you decide to look for me?!" EVENiNG interupted, feeling annoyed. " I don't believe you! You're sooooo interested in finding those dumb Ideya, that you don't even worry about my safety! Honestly, NiGHTS! I coulda gotten killed, you baka!"

NiGHTS looked at her sadly. " EVENiNG......I-"

"FORGET IT! Reala! Jackle! Falcon! Lets go...."

" EVENiNG!" NiGHTS looked at her, wide-eyed, " DON'T!"

" Later, loser!" EVENiNG teleported them all to Reala's Nightmare, leaving NiGHTS all alone, without even a clue as to where they could be. NiGHTS just stood there, in disbelief. He couldn't believe it. His friend, EVENiNG, just betrayed him. She did have a point, but was it even nessesery? NiGHTS sat down. It began to rain. First it started with a light drizzle, and quickly inclinded into a hard down pour.

'.....she does have a point....' NiGHTS thought ' I should apologize.... but where is she?' NiGHTS, without hesistation, flew straight off to Reala's Nightmare.
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" No way!"

" Yes, way!"

" Falcon, you flippin' liar!"

" Oh and I'm one to talk, psycho!"

" AM NOT!"

" ARE TOO!"

" AM NOT!"

" ARE TOO!"

Reala sat down on his throne, bored, staring at the quarriling Nightmaren.

" Well, at least I have a BODY!"

" AT LEAST I'M COLORFUL!"

" How's that prove anything?!"

" I proves you're a sad Nightmaren and I'm not!"

" SO?"

" YEAH!"

" WILL YOU TWO SHUT UP!!!!!" EVENiNG yelled, leaning againts the base of Reala's extremly tall throne. She had her arms crossed in front of her chest. She was tired of fighting, and of all the yelling. She had had it. EVENiNG gave them a glare that ment she ment buissiness. A glare that said, " You mess with me and the next thing you know it, you'll be on the ground crying "Uncle" "
Jackle and Falcon gulped.

" YES MAM'!"

" GOOD!"

Reala stared at her. He usually had to raise his voice twice to get the pair to behave, but EVENiNG just had to do it once. Reala felt a little jealous, but looked away, waiting.

' Where is he?'
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NiGHTS flew through the storm, blinded by the seemingly endless curtain of rain. Finally, he made it to Reala's lair.

" Finally...."

" Reala! Where's EVENiNG!?"

EVENiNG kept quite, as to not get spotted. But it didn't help. NiGHTs had spotted her. He flew up to her.

"......."

".....EVENiNG.....I'm sorry...you're abosolutly right..."

" WELL, YOU SHOULDA THOUGHT ABOUT IT IN THE FIRST PLACE!"

" EVENiNG...."

Reala quickly drill dashed NiGHTS, but NiGHTS got out of the way just in time.

" Reala, I don't have time for this!" NiGHTS looked back at EVENiNG, " Look, EVENiNG....I'm sorry....I was so careless......"

" You sure were." EVENiNG said in a very annoyed tone. NiGHTS looked at her sympathetically.

" Look, I'm sorry. I made a mistake and it won't happen again."

EVENiNG looked into his eyes. NiGHTS looked back into hers.

" Well...fine...apology accepted." EVENiNG floated up to NiGHTS. Reala got up.

" You two won't make it out alive!" Jackle cakled insanely.

" Oh, yes we will." EVENiNG replied with a smirk as she teleported NiGHTS and her out and back to Soft Museume.

" Oh, great. Nice going, Jackle. You just had to set her up for a come back. You're so stupid! "YOU TWO WONT MAKE IT OUT ALIVE!" YEAH! STUPID!"

Jackle glared back at Falcon. Reala groaned, seeing that the two were gonna get back into the usual rutine of arguing. Reala quickly covered his ears.

' This is gonna be a loooooong day' he thought, grimacing.
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EVENiNG looked around the area.

" Back to the drawing board..." she sighed.

" Hey, cmon. Stop thinking negative! It's not gonna help you out in anyway! Just think positive"

EVENiNG smiled, still looking a little bummed. She shrugged and flew off, followed by NiGHTS. The pair looked around the land scape, still heading for Spring Valley. The air was moist after the huge storm that hit, but it left a nice glistning look to the Nightopia. The area around them was calm and tranquil, which was a nice way to lift up some spirits. EVENiNG quickly stopped.

" I think we're being followed..."

NiGHTS stopped, right next to her. He had the same feeling. The looked around, carefully. Nothing.Nothing but some sleeping Nightopians.

" You sure it's not a Nightopian?" NiGHTS asked in a jokative tone.

" Oh course not!" EVENiNG snapped, " Don't be rediculous! I mean something like a Nightmaren."

" I know, I'm just pulling your leg. But there's nothing in the vicinity...... well... that and the Nightopians."

" Yeah....you're right. I still can't help but shake the feeling..."

" It'll be alright ^^ Now cmon. Lets get going!" NiGHTS took off, again. EVENiNG sighed once more and followed.

' How can he be so positive?' EVENiNG thought. But she put that behind her.

Gack, I hate this chapter DX Next one will be better 8D

Aw, don't hate it, I think it's a good emotional chapter...yet then again I like chapters like those.

Yeah don't hate it. Your stories are awesome! Keep going you're doing great. ^-^

Nice job. I was kinda confused when I saw new sections in that post XD