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The Brawl to End it All

Here There Be NiGHTS Fanfiction

The Brawl to End it All

Postby Electricshocker on Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:30 am

This is a Super Smash Bros. fan fiction but with Nights, Reala, and Jackle in it. If you want me to put your fan characters in it you are welcome to ask me, okay. Hope you like it. :)

Prologue: It was years after the first war against Master Hand. Dr. Mario, Pichu, Mewtwo, Young Link, and Roy all sacrificed their lives to defeat him. But, another good thing was discovered during the war. Nights, Reala, and Jackle (three mystical beings with the power of flight) each have a piece of the triforce within them and when they focus enough together it will unleash the power of the triforce. The energy was strong enough to defeat Master Hand. We all thought that after this war all this madness would stop but we were all wrong....

Well, that is my prologue. I am still writing and thinking about the first chapter. So, wait about two days for another entry on my fanfic! Please if you have any suggestions then I am open for them!
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Postby MegeDreamMe on Thu Jun 05, 2008 1:38 am

I love it!!!!!!!!
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Postby Nekokidd on Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:56 pm

Interesting idea. I like it. Can't wait for the story to pick up. I think KiTEN would like to be in it... *HintHint*
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Postby MagicPickleFairy on Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:10 pm

This seems interesting, since I just love Super Smash Bros and NiGHTS. I really can't wait to see more. I don't have any fancharacters for either of the fandoms, so I can't offer you to use any. Besides my two dreamers, but they have no fighting skills.

I will be looking forward to reading more.
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Postby Electricshocker on Sat Jun 07, 2008 4:32 am

Ok, Nekokidd just tell me more about KiTEN and her powers and I will put him or her in. :D

Chapter 1 The Message: "I wonder.... I have been having these visions about a more powerful opponent than master hand. This blue creature with wings...", Nights thought to himself with a worried face. "Hey Nights you got a problem?" Jackle asked Nights with a huge grin on his face. " I'm fine just thinking..." "About what?!" Jackle screamed. " Oh nothing. Lets go look for Reala." Nights began to fly and look for Reala when suddenly a blue transmitter came out of nowhere.
It began transmitting a blue reflection. " Nights come in Nights. This is Mario we have to meet. We have a problem and we need you to go out of your world and come to the base. NOW!" " But, we need to find Reala" Nights replied. "Fine, find him and come to base we need to talk about something."

Chapter 2 Subspace Super Smash: "Come on Reala come on out!" Jackle screamed at an ear-piercing sound. "Coming Jackle. What do you need anyway?" Reala asked with a confused look on his face. "It is Mario he says it is really important we fly out of Aqua Garden and meet him at the base." Jackle explained. "But, where is Nights?" Reala asked. "He already started flying to the base and we should too." Jackle once again explained. "Yeah but what is THAT?!" Reala screamed while pointing to a ship. "I have no idea Reala but get prepared to fight!" Jackle screamed and began to fly towards the ship.
Jackle threw a sharp card at the ship but it seemed it didn't have any effect... The ship began to launch purple balls of blob on the floor. The sky turned into a horrific shade of purple. The blobs began turing into soldiers. Many soldiers. "Reala no!" Purple blobs attached to Reala. Reala began flailing but it was no use. The purple blobs disappeared revealing a purple version of Reala. Then, a blue creature flew out of the ship.
" I am Tabuu. Your new ruler!"

So, how did you like it? Please give me some feedback. I will explain what had happened to Reala and Jackle in the next chapters. Thank you all for reading this too. Please support me! :P
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Postby haga11111 on Sat Jun 07, 2008 3:33 pm

It's... ok, I guess. A few things that you need to know:

A. Every time a different character speaks, it's a new line. So, you'd say something like:

"Hello," said Bob.
"Hi!" Excaimed Jill.

Not:

"Hello," "Hi!" Said Bob and Jill, or whatever.

B.Proper grammar in writing really helps. Just saying.

C. The chapters are pretty short.

Alright, those are my only problems with it. Other than that, it's pretty good.
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Postby Electricshocker on Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:42 am

Thanks Haga11111! I'll work on that. Besides that is okay with me if my grammar isn't good because I am still kind of learning English a bit too!
By the way here is Chapter 3 The Ship:
At The Base( Mario's world)... "I'm here Mario!" Nights screamed loudly.
"Welcome I have called you here because we have a problem..." Mario began.
"C'mon spit it out! I mean it isn't anything that bad right?" Nights asked with a puzzled look on his face.
"Our friends have been turning evil lately". Mario explained with a sad look on his face.
"How?!"
"Well, tiny round purple circles have been going over them and turning them evil."
There was a brief moment of silence.
"Wow! I hope Reala and Jackle are okay." nights thought to himself.
"Anyways, we need you here because almost everyone has been turned evil except for me, you, Link, Kirby, and Samus. So, we basically we need you to help defend the ship just in case they break in here and try to turn evil too. We also need help on researching about what we could do to get them to turn good again." Mario explained to Nights.
With that Mario lead Nights to his supercomputer where Link, Kirby, and Samus were all researching on the ominous purple tiny circles. But, Nights noticed that Samus looked really different from their last encounter.
"Oh by the way if you were wondering Samus lost her suit while getting here because the she was attacked and the purple things destroyed her suit so now she is currently wearing her Zero Suit right now." Mario explained.
"Whoa!!! Samus is a girl! I never knew that! I feel so dumb right now!" Nights thought.
"Wait Captain Mario! I think I found something!" Samus pointed to the giant screen and everyone began to approach her. She began reading it aloud...
"Purple cloud sightings and huge ship with mask sighted at Dreamland. Ship releases purple tiny circles that surrounds people and turns them evil. Captain of ship known as Tabuu ruler of Subspace."
Everyone had a blank and surprised expression on their faces, especially Kirby.
"I.... I can't believe that just happened to my world! Kirby said with had a very sad look on his face. It looked like he was about to cry.
"Don't worry! We'll take care of those Subspace pests! Link said to make Kirby feel better.
"Okay now that we know who their ruler is, what their called, and what their intention is. Now, we have to find out where they would attack next." Mario said.
Everyone thought for a moment then Nights began to speak... "Well, since Pikachu isn't here I guess they attacked Pokeworld, Hyrule, Dreamland, Galaxy Galactica (Samus's place), Fire Emblem Palace, soooo.. whats left? Nights asked with a blank expression on his face.
"Well there is Skyworld, Mario's place which we are in now, Banana Bonanza, Greenhill, Pk Place, and this place called Snake Center." Samus said.
"So, I guess we stay here until they attack and we need to find more survivors to help us." Link Said while smiling.
"Wait.... I think I hear some banging on the door right now..." Kirby said with a scared look on his face.
So how you like it? Now its question time!
Who is banging on the door? Is it the Subspace?
Keep reading to find out!
Oh, and this is late because I had to think of ideas. Anyone have any??
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