by Electricshocker on Thu Jul 10, 2008 3:42 am
Thanks Haga11111! I'll work on that. Besides that is okay with me if my grammar isn't good because I am still kind of learning English a bit too!
By the way here is Chapter 3 The Ship:
At The Base( Mario's world)... "I'm here Mario!" Nights screamed loudly.
"Welcome I have called you here because we have a problem..." Mario began.
"C'mon spit it out! I mean it isn't anything that bad right?" Nights asked with a puzzled look on his face.
"Our friends have been turning evil lately". Mario explained with a sad look on his face.
"How?!"
"Well, tiny round purple circles have been going over them and turning them evil."
There was a brief moment of silence.
"Wow! I hope Reala and Jackle are okay." nights thought to himself.
"Anyways, we need you here because almost everyone has been turned evil except for me, you, Link, Kirby, and Samus. So, we basically we need you to help defend the ship just in case they break in here and try to turn evil too. We also need help on researching about what we could do to get them to turn good again." Mario explained to Nights.
With that Mario lead Nights to his supercomputer where Link, Kirby, and Samus were all researching on the ominous purple tiny circles. But, Nights noticed that Samus looked really different from their last encounter.
"Oh by the way if you were wondering Samus lost her suit while getting here because the she was attacked and the purple things destroyed her suit so now she is currently wearing her Zero Suit right now." Mario explained.
"Whoa!!! Samus is a girl! I never knew that! I feel so dumb right now!" Nights thought.
"Wait Captain Mario! I think I found something!" Samus pointed to the giant screen and everyone began to approach her. She began reading it aloud...
"Purple cloud sightings and huge ship with mask sighted at Dreamland. Ship releases purple tiny circles that surrounds people and turns them evil. Captain of ship known as Tabuu ruler of Subspace."
Everyone had a blank and surprised expression on their faces, especially Kirby.
"I.... I can't believe that just happened to my world! Kirby said with had a very sad look on his face. It looked like he was about to cry.
"Don't worry! We'll take care of those Subspace pests! Link said to make Kirby feel better.
"Okay now that we know who their ruler is, what their called, and what their intention is. Now, we have to find out where they would attack next." Mario said.
Everyone thought for a moment then Nights began to speak... "Well, since Pikachu isn't here I guess they attacked Pokeworld, Hyrule, Dreamland, Galaxy Galactica (Samus's place), Fire Emblem Palace, soooo.. whats left? Nights asked with a blank expression on his face.
"Well there is Skyworld, Mario's place which we are in now, Banana Bonanza, Greenhill, Pk Place, and this place called Snake Center." Samus said.
"So, I guess we stay here until they attack and we need to find more survivors to help us." Link Said while smiling.
"Wait.... I think I hear some banging on the door right now..." Kirby said with a scared look on his face.
So how you like it? Now its question time!
Who is banging on the door? Is it the Subspace?
Keep reading to find out!
Oh, and this is late because I had to think of ideas. Anyone have any??
"Practice makes perfect...... But, no one is perfect so what's the point?"
~Taken from me ^^;